Writing Task 1: The Basics
Step 3: Rewrite the story from Step 2, but combine some of the sentences using "Subordination".
(See p 7 & p 9 in the BASICs Handout.)
You may add new information to make your complex sentences.
You can use "simple sentences" & "compound sentences" & "complex sentences" on this page.
Title: The love story
The main character is Micky.He is a man,and he has many friends.He is not only a famous star, but also he is a PSU student.He lives in Portland. One day, in the moning before he went to class, he bought a cup of coffee. When he recognized that he forgot to take his wallet, the next girl helped him to buy a coffee together.They talked with each other,and they found some same hobbies. When they had to go to different class,Micky asked the girl's phone number.The girl gave her phone number to Micky,and she told him that she was glad to meet him. Micky likes this girl, and he was happy to meet her. Also, they like each other and they like to be friends.
Since they told with each other, he asked her to go out and play together. They were both student,so they usually studied together. Not a long time, they fell in love. The girl didn't kown Micky was very busy, because Micky was a famous star . He was a good student on Monday to Friday. However,on weekend he became a star. After two weeks, the girl felt Micky has secret. It was very hard for her to find Micky,and she thought maybe he had not loved her. However he was very nice to her ,but he disappears in the weekends. Her friend told her he is a star, and Micky is his school name. She was very angry, for she thought she was deceived by Micky. Finally, they broke up.
Step 3: Rewrite the story from Step 2, but combine some of the sentences using "Subordination".
(See p 7 & p 9 in the BASICs Handout.)
You may add new information to make your complex sentences.
You can use "simple sentences" & "compound sentences" & "complex sentences" on this page.
Title: The love story
The main character is Micky.He is a man,and he has many friends.He is not only a famous star, but also he is a PSU student.He lives in Portland. One day, in the moning before he went to class, he bought a cup of coffee. When he recognized that he forgot to take his wallet, the next girl helped him to buy a coffee together. They talked with each other,and they found some same hobbies. When they had to go to different class,Micky asked the girl's phone number.The girl gave her phone number to Micky,and she told him that she was glad to meet him. Micky likes this girl, and he was happy to meet her. Also, they like each other and they like to be friends.
Since they told with each other, he asked her to go out and play together. They were both student,so they usually studied together. Not a long time, they fell in love.
The girl didn't kown Micky was very busy, because Micky was a famous star . He was a good student on Monday to Friday. However,on weekend he became a star. After two weeks, the girl felt Micky has secret. It was very hard for her to find Micky,and she thought maybe he had not loved her. However he was very nice to her ,but he disappears in the weekends. Her friend told her he is a star, and Micky is his school name. She was very angry, for she thought she was deceived by Micky. Finally, they broke up.